Tuesday, 28 June 2011

Giving Feedback...

Considering the task related with the literary text "To Kill a Mockingbird" presented by the students as an interview applies to the characters, I can give them feedback after reading their interview.

First, in accordance with the Qualities of your Ideas:
I think it is a good idea, considering the main theme about the book, but in other opportunity it could be a better idea to ask questions about feelings, emotions, relationships between the characters, because as a reader I'm interested in to know other aspects about the characters, not the same as I read through the book.  
Finally, it was a good work.
You have 9 points

Second, with respect to the Organization:
They are good, but you can improve them giving it other order, maybe reorganizing the questions, they could be related one to another.  For example in the case of talking about myths, you can follow with other question related with the same subject, as a continuous idea.
You have : 8 points

Third, in the case of Language:
Well, in this case, I consider there are some mistakes you can correct, referring to some spelling mistakes, in the case of which, you miss the consonant "h" between the letter "w" and the vowel "i", so it could be a good idea to work with a dictionary to confirm the spelling of some words before you write a final idea to present your work.  After that, you also miss to put some capital letters, in the case of Maycomb, and other characters.  You should take care about writing proper nouns.  On the other hand, you also write some words twice, so you have to give a look to your work before you present your work. But finally you made a very good work in relation with the syntax of your work, for instance in the case of the first question you used a perfect second conditional clause, which is a very complex clause, and in other case the position about adverbs are really well, it has a very good syntax, so congratulations in this sense, because to get a good syntax is preferable than to have a good spelling, it's easier to correct spelling than to correct Syntax.
You have 7

So, finally you have 23 points, you did a good work, but it could be a better work for the next time to be considered the previous feedback to get a better mark and improve your english language.

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